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critiquesThis week�s poster from reader Irena Feng, and is used with her permission. Click to enlarge!
The mouse picture provides an immediate and powerful entry point into the poster. The direction of the mouse�s head draws attention away from the (unnecessary) abstract, and into the introduction and methods, which is a more relevant starting point. The text wrapping around the mouse�s whiskers and body is not perfect, but certainly better than if it had been left square.
Putting the authors above the title is a bit of a risk. It works because the title is set in very large type. Plus, the lightened band of colour under the title makes it higher contrast, thus keeping the title the focus of attention.
I would have liked to have seen a little more consistency in the headings� size. The �Results� heading is larger than the others. Plus, the headings in the text don't match those in the title.
The poster is meant to be read in rows, which is clearly indicated by the use of changing green backgrounds to group the rows together. The green seems to have been selected because many of the micrographs showing in the results are green. I worry about the green being a little dark, however, particularly the first row containing the introduction.
The width of the �Conclusions� section is less than ideal. Typesetters aim for 10-12 words per line of text, and these are at least double that. One solution might be to split the �Conclusions� box into two: one �Conclusions,� then a second that says, �Next step,� and highlights the last line.
Irena wrote:
Those compliments are deserved. This poster hits most of the marks you want in a conference poster, and avoids most of the pratfalls that you don�t want.
The mouse picture provides an immediate and powerful entry point into the poster. The direction of the mouse�s head draws attention away from the (unnecessary) abstract, and into the introduction and methods, which is a more relevant starting point. The text wrapping around the mouse�s whiskers and body is not perfect, but certainly better than if it had been left square.
Putting the authors above the title is a bit of a risk. It works because the title is set in very large type. Plus, the lightened band of colour under the title makes it higher contrast, thus keeping the title the focus of attention.
I would have liked to have seen a little more consistency in the headings� size. The �Results� heading is larger than the others. Plus, the headings in the text don't match those in the title.
The poster is meant to be read in rows, which is clearly indicated by the use of changing green backgrounds to group the rows together. The green seems to have been selected because many of the micrographs showing in the results are green. I worry about the green being a little dark, however, particularly the first row containing the introduction.
The width of the �Conclusions� section is less than ideal. Typesetters aim for 10-12 words per line of text, and these are at least double that. One solution might be to split the �Conclusions� box into two: one �Conclusions,� then a second that says, �Next step,� and highlights the last line.
Irena wrote:
I received a lot of attention and a few compliments, with one comment describing it as �better than any grad student�s poster I�ve seen� (I�m a high schooler, so that comment was especially appreciated).
Those compliments are deserved. This poster hits most of the marks you want in a conference poster, and avoids most of the pratfalls that you don�t want.
